Comments:
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Adrian Winchell:
Seems like the pillow should keep tumbling not just stick to the side of the frame after it's been thrown. Since you opted to light and render this, a fill light behind the camera to bring out the details in their faces would have been nice.
Evan Helford:
It started out nice with the camera angle and the poses. However, as the shot went on, it felt like the poses got less solid and the animation seemed more floaty. I was also confused by the food he grabbed out of mid-air.
Animator: Joas
Description: Dorm frenemies clash over food.
Experience: About a year as a student; no professional experience.
Time taken: Several weeks, in between other projects.