Comments:
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Kevin McCullough:
brown character on a brown ground plane is very hard to see, but from what I can see its not that great, needs better planning for poses so its not so spliny. Also I don't see the storytelling need for the character to be seated.
Cameron:
Mouths need shapes, right now all there is is jaw movement. Good camera staging.
Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:
Lip sync is off..
Jon Coppock:
Great start, I recomend refining the mouth shapes.
April Slocombe:
A couple of cliched poses on "What?" and "Why?" But the rest of the poses and movements are fine as is the lip sync.
Animator: Angelo Aprea
Description: Two men resting in front of an an ominous stream.
Experience: One year
Time taken: About 3 weeks