Ariyanto Zulkifli:

nice try. But in my opinion, you need to shot some real reference.
the facial expression is not hitting the mark. and feels creepy. Really nice try on the ending btw. keep practicing, you'll get better. :)

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Okayyy... Didn't expect such an extension of the time... It has a nice setup and nice expressions... Quite funny... Although a bit overacted, I guess? Maybe some more details could have made it even better.

Marcella D.:

Weird

John:

Funny, but I think you cut away too early from the mother.

abbas:

lol

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall. I think you should work more on your poses before splining. Remember, an animation is made of several consequential well worked poses. Good luck