Maryline Chemoula:

I love the idea, the setting and Mathilda looks good.
In my opinion Mery should bend over when she is telling her to go drink in the house.

Daniel Bielawski:

some really nice face shapes on girl

Gaucelm De Villaret:

Feels okay, a bit pedestrian. But executed well in the first half, Could be more open to creativity. The waitress lacks the right expression, but maybe this is the concept... Although it is not right-away clear.

Jessica "Jess" Jerome:

the kid lip sync needs work

OceanicBoy Joey:

somehow their face looks funny, idk is it the lighting issue.. kinda weird,lol..

Marcella D.:

Very nice

Fernando Incetta:

Great facial expressions, specially in the young lady. Try to add more body language too, instead of having both of them standing with their hands off-camera

Syeda Tooba Ali:

nice work good job