Gaucelm De Villaret:

Good job with the angle views, but lacks expression and energy.

imran younas butt:

there is jerk between 15 frame to 23....and 140 to 148
also need anticipation and fellow through

Marcella D.:

This feels so incomplete

Jose Virgil:

i like some of the mechanic movement...sliding in the seat.

Fernando Incetta:

Good idea overall, try to rely less on the automated splines and work more on your pose-to-pose. Don't be afraid to exaggerate and to push your poses even further. Good luck.

Ariyanto Zulkifli:

careful with the timing and spacing.