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Christoph Lendenfeld:
you clearly ran out of time which is a pity because I like the idea and the animation is good aswell. However I don't like that he runs away at the end. It doesn't really fit with the voice I think. I mean you could make him run but first let him finish talking
Danny Kneip:
For what it is, it's okay. Obviously it needs completion and major polishing. You have a good foundation.
Rotimi Emmanuel Olowu:
the character in the t-pose should be animated, it is kind of awkward
Kamal Bhattacharjee:
what the FFFFFF!!!!
Ian Alexander Hanson:
Would like to see finished!
Like the running out idea.
Watch spine and hips work.
Animator: Sarah
Description: Matt is buying a new cellphone. He knows next to nothing about them and is discussing the merits of a particularly heavy duty phone with the salesman, Sam. After the contract has been signed, Sam’s not responsible for any radiation poisoning.
Experience: 3 months
Time taken: 2 weeks