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Genndy:
Very interesting artistic choices! The characters are funny and amusing. Such a fun scene with amazing animation. I hope your work gets the recognition it deserves.
Ira Zagrivaya:
I absolutely love the animation here.
Odelys A.:
I love how the camera irregularly moves while following the characters, and the lighting adds much more dimension to the setting. The main strengths in the animation include the sharp movements, the sniff, the hair’s overlap and follow-through, the facial expressions, the arm touch, and the limb fluidity. The interactions also seem very comedic, largely the “don’t touch me” part. However, try synchronizing the footsteps to the audio as well as making the mouth pronouncing the words more dramatically. Awesome work!
jm_animator:
Great Job! Winner!
Muhundan Bala:
Love the snappy animation. Think it's one of the best ones this month.
One gesture i don't quite get is the salute the man does when he says any questions.
Feels a bit off.
Love the run the kid does to catch up to the officer. Really shows the personality.
Nico Bisceglia:
Great job on this animation!! Your movement and timing are amazing, as well as the fluidity of the animation. I appreciate the details of the hair, glasses and fabric movement. You have such expressive animation I almost feel like I miss the reaction to "Don't touch me!" at the end because of the subtleness of the expression. I think pushing the expression at the end will really enhance the ending.
David S. Rodriguez:
I love this animation, and I love the dynamic of these two characters. Superb job on this piece as it looks very good.
Animator: Richard Clark
Description: Veteran instructs a young trainee
Carl and Chris from ProRigs.com
everything else is either taken from free3d.com or created by myself
Animation done in Maya, Rendered with Arnold.
Experience: 20 years
Time taken: about 20 days