Donald Marks:

Decent drawings, and tweens. Maybe add some more weight to his movements by adding some anticipation and follow through on some of those poses.

Michael Yochim:

Cute style,

Rachel Col:

I love your style!! Really good character designs, too!

Iain Wilson:

really good! the last second got cut off on upload, it seems.

Annie Iglesias:

I wish you had used the whole clip!

Steve Schwartz:

It's nice but you're missing the last line "And then they would leave". As good as it is, it's not finished.

Joaquin Casas:

Lol there's other animation at the news! Where's the end of the audio?

Imon Branch:

good topic

BingBong:

Missing the very last line of audio.