Jeff Kamdon:

I like the cinematography, background, and staging.

The part where the villain says "Well you must!" felt the most authentic and relaxed, but the rest of the movement feels stilted and too pose-to-pose-- especially at "...you know, frustratingly you?". I get what the poses are going for though.

Great job with the victim. The shot looking down on him feels right with the pitch black surrounding him, and his facial expression and hand gesture are short and sweet.

Juan Garcia:

Lipsync could be improved