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Because I don’t have a secret

by America Michelle

Final Rating: 4.32. Finished 117 out of 282 entries.

306 views including the voting period.

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Animator: America Michelle

Description: its my second time animating so i have a little more time.

Experience: im student, its my second time

Time taken: 5 days

Comments:

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Jeff Kamdon:

The movement of the interrogator keeps bobbing up and down. It feels distracting and unusual. I like that the background and props you added are simple-- just having them there to interact with the characters makes a big difference.

Steve Reach:

Action is very jerky and too much movement. Needs a lot of smoothing.