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The Reflective Child Spy

by Jonathon

Final Rating: 4.14. Finished 117 out of 195 entries.

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Animator: Jonathon

Description: The Reflective boy talks to the pale man about becoming a spy too. He discourages the child as to not make their hopes too high.

Experience: I have been animating on and off for roughly 3 years

Time taken: I took about all month to do this

Comments:

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Emmelyn:

Good lip syncing, and nice clear poses and expressions! I'd say work on improving the fluidity of the motion, everything should move in arcs, even the bodies, which should always be moving even just slightly to adjust for weight shifts. Remember the legs are supporting the character, so everything above them will react when they move.

Éloise Valiquette:

Good fluidity of movement and good lipsync!

eddyiv:

The body getting bigger when he gets angry is a nice touch.

Zachary Lussier:

I think the mouvement and the facials overall have to be improve to make your animation better. Continue to work you will get it one day ;-)

Simon Côté:

the movements are pretty robotic but good lipsync :)

Anthony Abou Rezk:

The animation is pretty smooth! Even though some parts are lacking, the scene is clear and was okay, so good job and keep working!