Emmelyn:

I wish we could see the other person talking since they speak for most of it. But nice animation on the man! Expressions are clear, mouth could use a little work.

Jordan Kiep:

Could use better staging and less even movements.

eddyiv:

The movements and emotions shown are fairly spot-on, but i do feel like it would've been nice with a bit of exaggeration,

Éloise Valiquette:

Your animation gives me the impression of having improved from your wip! It is smoother and you can feel the movement of the lower body better!

Foxy:

It's weird that he turns around before we actually hear the kid say "wait!". Make sure that your characters are reacting to the dialogue and not anticipating it. Also, I know two characters is a lot of work, but we really need to see the child talking since they're the one with the most dialogue.

Zachary Lussier:

Like the facials expressions, good job !

Simon Côté:

it is smooth at the beginning :)