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Girl who wants to be a spy

by Alicia Galicia

Final Rating: 4.05. Finished 126 out of 195 entries.

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Animator: Alicia Galicia

Description: This animation was made for a school practice.

Experience: not much.

Time taken: 8 hours

Comments:

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Garrett Evans:

I think you did a good job on the lip sync but it'd be nice if the girls body would move.

Brittany H. Simpson:

Nice head and eye movement. I like the rig design. The hair felt stiff compared to the other movements. Overall great job.

Simon Côté:

It needs a little bit more fluidity in the movements ;)

Zachary Lussier:

I think the fact he have a little break between the facials poses made your facials less good so always in mouvement can be a huge improve.

eddyiv:

The mouth movements were very good, they seemed very fluent, however i feel like the head couldve used more keys and more subtle movements, it still feels somewhat robotic

Éloise Valiquette:

Your lipsync is fine, but the facial expression and upper body could have been working better. I find that we do not feel the expression of your character enough!

Anthony Abou Rezk:

Nice start! I feel like if you added more movement under the neck, it would look a lot more natural, try doing that and I'm sure you'll see a huge difference. Good job!