Zachary Lussier:

I love it but the fact your character stop in specific moments ruin the mouvement and the fuidity of your animation. Good job overall !

Éloise Valiquette:

I like the fluidity of your character's writing movement, play well!

eddyiv:

try using different movements with more dramatic speed differences.

Simon Côté:

tempo pretty slow but fluid :)

Anthony Abou Rezk:

It's nice, but the character look more like puppets than animated characters, maybe if you moved more parts of the body, to make it look more alive, anyway keep grinding!