Emmelyn:

I love the expressions, especially the man's annoyance and the little girl saying, "When I grow up". Poses are clear and well-timed. I wish the camera was zoomed in more so we could see it more clearly, cuz I think there are a lot of details that are missed because it's so subtle and hard to see from far away. Nice work!!

Levy Van Malder:

you could have set the shot closer, now you lose alot of the emotion

Simon Côté:

I really like it! Camera placing would be better ;)

Zachary Lussier:

Great animation, good job !

eddyiv:

The animation was pretty good!

Éloise Valiquette:

I think the camera could be a little closer to your characters so that we can see them a little better in this small format. Your animation seems smooth and good to me. I like the reactions of your characters!

Anthony Abou Rezk:

Nice job! I like the setting, I just thing you should've put the camera a little closer to the characters, just so we can see them better, the animation is good, especially on the little girl, but some poses look a little stiff.

Foxy:

I'd work on trying to find some more interesting poses to put the characters in for a better foundation. Right now they are very symmetrical and static. Most people don't sit/stand the way that the guy does. It would also help to zoom in the camera a little more so we can see the characters better as there is no reason for us to be this far away. Also maybe tone down the neon-green of your floor. It's a bit distracting.