Simon Côté:

the fluidity is interesting :)

eddyiv:

the pulsating lines give the characters more life. pretty nice!

Foxy:

Hey, not bad! I appreciate the posing you have here. The first thing I noticed is that it feels like there are too many camera cuts for such a short period of time. Maybe reduce those so we can focus on the characters more!

Éloise Valiquette:

You should probably review your images again, your animation skips during the animation, it makes the image really twitchy. It makes your animation lose fluidity.

Zachary Lussier:

I think the audio was badly made in your animation, but overall good animation start

Anthony Abou Rezk:

I like this, it's funny, with a bit more time you could have made something great!