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Ben Zingo:
Some nice work here! -But the framing is a bit awkward, and your one character is slowly floating up and down. I'm assuming that's to simulate breathing? A little ambient movement might be nice, but this just feels a little distracting.
For the framing, you might want to study conversations in film, or study storyboarding
Jarrod Kerr:
hand feels stiff on the wave and you could open up the fingers a little bit :)
Animator: Andrew Sorter
Description: Guy makes a tray of macaroni out of boredom and hunger
Experience: Not much, but I had fun doing this!
Time taken: Roughly 10 hours total