Ben Zingo:

try acting out the scene yourself! People rarely count on their fingers while in conversation...it seems like you're thinking too much on how to literally demonstrate the phrases they are saying....rather than conveying their thoughts and emotions through body language

Michael D. Smith:

First pass on blocking it looks like. I would not move the camera so much as it's distracting and seems to want to say something that isn't in line with what you're presenting.