Julian Dill:

It could use some work on the moving holds.

VINCENT Nathan:

a really good job but i think the extreme of each movement have a timing a little too even if you exaggerate some of them it would be more interesting i think

olivia hartanto:

Wow the movement is splendid

Ben Zingo:

it feels very pose-to-pose, and doesn't feel natural. Try to act out the scene yourself, and relax/just do what comes naturally. People don't really hit key poses or try to emphasize every phrase with a unique gesture!

Ryan Williams:

Posing and timing are good.