Eddie Higgenbottom:

poor animation

Enrico Westley:

Needs more story-telling poses, and that will make it more appealing.

Juan Carlos A C:

nothing work in here. But, I must say, that a short film with a funny script and this direction and acting could be very funny.

Aaron McGriff:

Staging needs some work and the camera moves are jarring and unnecessary. Focusing on the character performance more would help.

Jez:

I don't think we need those camera moves