Jason Abby George:

Nice work !
last section from frame 268 could be more expressive and some body movement would help.

Benjamin Berg:

Decent work so far. I would say that the staging could use some work. At the first 160 frames the character on the right doesn't seem to be acting properly to the character on the left. The third person at frame 161 comes out of nowhere and there is no build up to this character. Last thing I'll mention is that the shot could use more polish.