Final Rating: 3.80. Finished 115 out of 177 entries.

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Animator: George

Description: This animation was done with the Mery Rig.

Experience: 2-3 years

Time taken: ~12 hours (not including rendering)

Comments:

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Hugo Daniel Gamboa:

I think the camera movement is there just as a filler, there is no need for it.

Michael Launder:

you have a good opportunity to showcase things like lip synch and acting, your camera is just pushed so far away! i cant see your animation very well. also look for things that are really floaty, like her screen left hand floats along the window for a ton of frames around 235. Find the key pose and NAIL it and the appeal will be there

David Alin:

camera is too far from her

Dominic Rayner:

Distracting camera move. Shame because it hides the character work. Hands slide too much.

Bryan Stone:

why so far back?

andrzej:

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