Brian Rusnak:

Nice work. I like the first character's movement on his first line "Woah", pushing back from the building.

I feel like the animation would be more clear without the panning camera work. Try to set up the shot where all of your subjects are in frame, and build upon your animation up from there.

James Harkonnen:

try coming up with a better blocking next time.

Vedanth Panchoo:

Audio is a bit messy. Love the concept though.

Prashant Makwana:

Lacks fundamentals