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Our First Christmas

by maye liu

Final Rating: 5.28. Finished 38 out of 96 entries.

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Animator: maye liu

Description: A couple spends their first christmas together, laughing at a funny photograph they took.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 3 weeks

Comments:

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Ben Zingo:

having the camera push in closer, would help us see the characters a little more clearly. Actions also feel a bit jerky, make sure you're using splines, and offsetting some of the actions!

Leonardo Rivera:

wasnt a fan of the far away camera angle. It was alright the set the scene but when you cut to a closer camera angle you shouldve stay at that angle. Posing and timing could use more work but I like the effort you put into the background