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Their "best" and "worst" photo

by Jaser Ameer

Final Rating: 5.04. Finished 52 out of 96 entries.

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Animator: Jaser Ameer

Description: A couple has differing opinions on how each other look together in a photo.

Experience: 8-9 months

Time taken: Around 30 - 40 hrs

Comments:

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Ben Zingo:

Too many cuts make this scene feel fast & jarring.
Some of the individual movements look good, but there's so much going on that it's hard to focus on any one thing. Make sure you're adding blinks, and clear mouth shapes for lipsync

Leonardo Rivera:

The movements look mechanical and all the camera cuts were a bit jarring

Sam Kim:

Animation is good but there should be a little bit more anticipation at the beginning.