Eric Raffle:

try and remember for next time that to make motion flow properly you need to move more than just the head arms and fingers, there where loads of spaces where there was lots of dead movement, your lip-sync on the other hand was too choppy and at times it was not in sync, too many jaw drops for your character and you need to remember that every time you open the characters mouth its going to affect something like the cheeks of bottom eyelids, also not to much facial expressions and not defined enough.

Adrian Winchell:

There really should be more body action to this, if you're only gonna focus on one character for the entire time. He looks bored, and we feel bored. Plus, everything before frame 210 is so gradual it seems to float.

Richard Adams:

Primary thing missing here, face isn't expressive enough. Eyebrows, cheeks, mouth need more work. Good work otherwise.

Yogesh Paradkar:

hands movements odd....