Jean Lamy:

You spent too much time at the beginning, this was about 25 secs and if you had taken out the first couple seconds, jumped right into an establishing shot, and then the dialogue, you would've have more time.

The acting, timing, and weight is lacking in this piece.

Felipe Navarro:

You completely lost me at the beginning, the woman does a weird move at the beginning.

Heather Richmond:

Characters' lunge movements are too much in the beginning.

Sujit Karmakar:

Animation before audio not needed. Need to concentrate in audio part only. So that you can utilize your time properly.

Hari Krishna Gunda:

nice

Gaurav Rawat:

good work

Navdeep Singh Sran:

Looks great !

Pavan Sri:

really nice,lip sync came good..keep it up

Sandeep Chauhan:

nice execution

Erin Goddard:

Try simplifying the story at the beginning. There is too much happening before the dialogue even starts, you can save yourself a lot of time by just sticking to the 11 second sound clip.

Jenon Tuladhar:

?

Sabrina Winkel:

At the end the boy moves his body too fast

Amit Gupta:

Nice job , I like the animation, nice lipsiing and and animation flow