Marcos Elias:

good animation, but bad stage, you should make a better cam.

Lauren Kimball:

You should bring the camera in closer.

Alexander Julius:

Why is the shot so far away? Other than that, I enjoy the acting choices!

Poppy Marlow:

would've been great if the camera was closer

Elisabeth Janerka:

Nice!
The framing could be a bit closer though as they become a bit small in the frame

Mauro:

you could use a better staging (maybe use this camera for a stablishing shot, the cut for a close up), another tip is to stop the guy singing a little earlier

Ramon Arango:

don't playblast with film gate please. That framing makes the characters very small for no reason.

Celine Heijnen:

Pretty good animation. But I would put the camera closer to the characters. It's too far away to notice details.

Henry Barbee:

Wow, pretty good! You should turn off the safe zone for your camera though, cause it’s really zoomed out right now. Also the hud, so there’s no info onscreen.

Samuel Bourland:

I think some different framing would guide the watchers focus better.