Navaneeth:

nice poses! good work!

May need to adjust the timing .

ben malberg:

I think you made some good acting choices and the timing feels pretty good. I think it still needs some work on the body mechanics, it feels a bit floaty. I like the slap at the end.

Steve Schwartz:

Body looks good but focus a little more on lip sync

David Borja:

Great movement, but I don't think the poses convey the emotions of the character too well. They're a little bit unnatural, ie most women wouldn't stick the chest out as much as this one did. I really liked the snap and clap at the end, though, haha :)

Harry G:

Not very fluid. It still seems to be in the blocking stages.

Amartya Mukherji:

Animation is not bad, but too melodramatic. Too much pose to pose action, needs to be blended nicely. And the most important thing is, - the tempo of the voice don't match your acting. Needs a lot of improvement

Shark Bait:

poses don't seem very natural