Jessica "Jess" Jerome:

the animation is pretty stiff. Also the animation in the arms is a little floatly.

Raghav Nagpal:

Expressionless

Michael Launder:

i'd really concentrate on animation over rendering, this could have been presented in a playblast format and you could have spent a lot more time plussing the animation

Sajid Ali Mansoori:

Floaty Animation..

Kirsten Schow:

The motions are very swimmy, lip sync still needs work. Also, staging. The story is confusing with just the camera on the two men with not very much to tell me what they are doing. I think they are bird watching, but in the African savanna? Keep working!