Comments:
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Michael Launder:
key poses are what you're missing, It feels like he's standing in frame and talking, try and get his body to feel like its telling the story for you! he's lost a swan? will he get in trouble with the boss? is the he the boss of the show? try and emote these feeling with body language
Raghav Nagpal:
Nice expressions. Spine looks looks dead.
Animator: Toni Andrews
Description: Audience interview after the show.
Experience: Student
Time taken: 5 days