Johann Wong:

Nice poses! Overall look really floaty. Fix those & u should be on your way, friend.

Scott:

The lip sync needs to be tightened up.

Hajar Khakrand:

Good story and poses but a bit floaty

Adam Maier:

Good body motion, the mouth needs cleaning up to read better with the audio

Theodor Isaac Zecevic:

So far, probably the best ending that I have seen!

Lea:

Great setup and pay-off. Animation is decent but a little floaty - lipsync is too soft throughout so maybe do another pass on it and you'll have a really nice scene here.

Vin Liew:

Floaty animation, too much animation for both character at the same time, need to focus on one at a time.