Final Rating: 5.64. Finished 28 out of 93 entries.

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Animator: Nigel Cunningham

Description: A man returns home expecting to be forgiven...

Experience: 1.5 years

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Johann Wong:

Try some "moving holds". Bit stiff atm, but keep it up! :)

Brad Bradbury:

Great work.
the last camera shot just isn't needed just have her leave.

His hand and body lock up right at 85,
I would continue overlap on the fingers/hand.
Add some 'keep alive' here.