Comments:
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Johann Wong:
Nice poses there, overall animation seem kinda stiff.
Scott:
Good choice of characters, lip sync and movements are a bit poppy.
Donald Marks:
Really stiff characters. The face and mouth animations are decent, but the body's feel very animatronic.
Erin Goddard:
wedding ring goes on the left hand, watch out for the little details, but nice animation. I like her facial expressions
Theodor Isaac Zecevic:
Loved the ending, especially how you don't fully see his face. Her eye movement looking at the ring was pretty convincing!
Monica Stringer:
that arm jerk is a bit distracting, if its trying to be cartoony, it doesnt quite match the rest of the animation. Also the womans head shaking goes on a bit to long as well.
I like the tiny details like the womans fingers twitching, and the movement in the guys eyebrows in the first bit - good attention to detail.
The way you direct the narrative with eye movement is pretty good to.
Animator: Kyungjin Han
Description: There is a man who thinks he paid a dept to the society by spending time in the jail. His wife is visiting him, and they have a conversation. His wife wanna divorce him.
Experience: 5
Time taken: 2 weeks