Howard Cameron:

Missing the P on "Please". Overall very very well done :)

Alessio:

Top, very nice !!

Zim:

Mais où sont les gows ?!

William Barry Eggington:

Wowa. That got dark quickly. Awesome work.

Murat Sari:

nice touch with the cigarette

Amartya Mukherji:

liked it. Nicely done but need a lot of polishing. The acting looks a little stiff.

J.K. Riki:

This is a great example of taking acting to another level. The woman doesn't need to be gesturing like a mad person, and it works beautifully well when you use subtly. Nice work!

Shadrak Guichard-Foster:

Love it! The only thing that bothered me, was that the gun seems to already be in her face yet she remains so calm? Was that an intentional acting choice? If so, it doesn't come across as such. Fantastic work though! Love her attitude

Grace Mojica:

Great animation!

Brian Duffy:

good animation but the "surprise" storytelling device doesn't play. you're trying to subvert the power dynamic between the characters for subversion's sake, and it's jarring more than it's interesting. focus more on serving the spirit of the dialogue than going for clever twists

Mananvir Singh:

No smoking :)