Adrian Petitjean:

Weight problems everywhere. Take some references. The timing is off. Go back to the fundementals

Victor Lemée:

Lack some weight, camera angle are a bit off. Take some reference and watch your arcs

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

Might need to work on the character's weight.

Daniele Croce:

Try to watch a lot of videos of real parkour and study the timing and the poses of the movements.