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Scene in a grocery store

by Laurine

Final Rating: 3.11. Finished 58 out of 61 entries.

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Animator: Laurine

Description: Thanks

Experience: Few months

Time taken: Three weeks

Comments:

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Shaun Bartoo:

Timing feels a bit loose, even for a blocking WIP.

David Fliesen:

Very rough. You need to use the 12 principles of animation more in your work: https://ohmy.disney.com/movies/2016/07/20/twelve-principles-animation-disney/ and also finish what you started. Turn in work that has completed animation and lip sync.