Danny Kneip:

Nice work and a brave choice, methinks, to post something that doesn't provide all the answers. The poses and gestures are believable (even over the top with the cigarette ending) but the lip sync seems slightly off - maybe it's just me. Both the subtle cigarette smoke and motion blur are very well done! I think I recognize your work (certainly the room) from your previous entry in May?? Love the style and characters and you seem to have a mostly strong, confident control of them!

Samar Preet Bawa:

missed the lippsing and expressions with sound... take care in future.. :)

Ryan D Lowe:

Lip sync is the biggest opportunity here. Use more varied mouth shapes.
I'm not sure why he taps on the gun with his cigarette though.

Liviu Boar:

Woah... weird acting there