Dan Harriman:

The first part is quite nicely done, up until the guy says, "No ..." It feels physically grounded and it's nicely paced to portray sadness.

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!

Danny Kneip:

Took me awhile to figure out that's a body bag, but the hand drawn animation is good overall.