Roger Crown:

Am not sure where the cat shows that he or the magic of life is there in the fish bag.

So you have the guys face divider line mostly true, but then he is missing on frames here and there.

Do your char's heads get bigger or smaller as this plays out, which is true.

It does look like you tried to have fun, because of the ruff draws,,,,good for you.

Hope to see your new animation with the aug. competetion
because it looks like you will improve greatly, but only if you send in each and every competion from now on.............for say the next 6 months.........

Jesse J. Jones:

Hard to tell what's going on.

fabien:

pas abouti mais sympa

Jez:

kind of an abstract .... a good study case but ....

Ryan D Lowe:

Hi there.
When I was first starting out, no one ever
took the time to say anything on my shots.

I can't give you constructive feedback here,
as your work seems to lack an overall
understanding of the principles of animation.

However, I emplore you to seek out these
books, and began your studies.

"Character Animation Crash Course"-Eric Goldberg
"Acting for Animators"- Revised Edition
"How to Cheat in Maya 2012/2014"-Lutha Roy

There are many more, but these will get you
started. Best of luck on your journey!