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Aesculapian Sarcasm

by Angelo Aprea

Final Rating: 2.98. Finished 136 out of 151 entries.

334 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Angelo Aprea

Description: A doctor checks up on his sarcastic patient and tries to lighten his mood.

Experience: Currently enrolled for a BA in computer animation

Time taken: 2.5 weeks

Comments:

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Robert Zhou:

I like the way you frame these characters. I think you need to work a bit on following through with your characters' actions and syncing with the audio. Still nice though!

Nikolas Diamant:

The mouths need some work

Tyson Haeh:

The lip sync is off

Bruno de Coninck:

Very robotic here. Your character are just floating from pose to pose. Adding some breaking poses could probably improve a lot your animation.

Nathan Greensmith:

Good poses, needs a bit more flow and lip sync work, but good effort and keep practicing. :)

Moby:

A little stiff