Comments:
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Bruno de Coninck:
Pretty good. A bit mecanic throught. Bt overall, it is a respectable animation! Continue this way!
Nikolas Diamant:
The first shot is unnecessary, but good job otherwise
Kyle Novak:
one of the better 3d attempts, and not a terrible concept, just wish there was more detail.
Nathan Greensmith:
Great scene, good poses, nice animation. Good job.
Martin Strom:
I think the staging in the last shot is a little bit to much in front view, when it comes to the guy who's holding the cellphone. The old man on the other hand moves pretty good.
Ramon Arango:
I like the calm guy with the phone but after he said his lines he seems kind of dead, probably because he just "drifts" from pose to pose. Try to write down what he thinks when he is silent. His reactions to the other character or his attitude to his collegue. Maybe he thinks this old dude is disgusting and rolls his eyes when he starts to talk. Thinking about stuff like that helps making your characters seem alive when they really dont "do" anything.
Animator: Adam Momsen
Description: Our heroine Mery finds herself in quite a predicament! Would calling Certified Superhero Captain Wilfred bring the help she needs? His heroic reputation is somewhat less than shining...
Experience: MFA Computer Art, some shorts. No professional experience yet.
Time taken: Started around July 10th (travel), worked nights and weekends.