Nicki Pierce:

I wish we saw more movement/change when we punch in dramatically on his face at the end. The first "shot" is very impressive, nice shadow detail. I really like the kid's movement, lots happening at once but very smooth and human. The doctor's response was nice as well, we get a strong sense of awkward sympathy in his body language.

Anonimator:

I like the staging of the first shot, clear what the situation is. Animation could use some accents, overlap, etc. Has some drifting between poses.

Darren Teh:

Feels floaty overall..might wanna tighten the timing a little. I think the back part could be better if its the doc's pov. With the main character looking up at the end.