Kirsten Schow:

After seeing all the submissions to this month's contest, I can safely say that I need to exaggerate MORE on my lip sync, I need to get better at showing expressions on faces, and I need many more arcs in my arm movements. :)

Reg Isaac:

I'd recommend framing your shots a little better next time, keeping the character centre of the screen between cuts is bit boring and bland. even if its just framing the first guy to the left half of the screen, and the second guy to the right half of the screen, the conversation will seem a lot clearer

Zachary Checkeye:

Camera's too far away, I can't make out their faces.