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by Kunal Mukherjee

Final Rating: 3.51. Finished 96 out of 129 entries.

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Animator: Kunal Mukherjee

Description: Hello at first I am very happy to participate in the competition.
In the scene I want to show that a friend is trying to scare his friend by explain about a place called Marryland.

Congratulation in advance for the winner.

Thanks

Experience: 6 years

Time taken: 14-15 hours

Comments:

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Christine Miller:

You're malcolm character is a little floaty so I would add a little weight and pauses on him

Rahul Rishikesh:

Nice costumes :D

Jordan Crownshaw:

Seems as though this was quite Pose to Pose, too much going on with a lot of action. Try to simplify it down a little and think of what happens between each pose. That as well as the emotions don't seem to match the dialogue, do some self reference or watch other animations for inspiration :)