Harry Roger Smith:

Everything is nice and smooth, however the hand actions on the lady don't quite work for me. You've tried to do too many poses in too short of a space of time and it comes across as a bit muddled.

Kartikey:

great work!

Alex Ang:

You're hitting each mouth shape right on the dialogue which is impossible for people to do with their mouths in normal conversation. look at yourself in the mirror as you recite the dialogue at regular speed and you'll see what I mean.

To fix it you pick the mouth shapes that matter the most to give the dialogue and you fudge all of the others

Eddie Higgenbottom:

not too much a normal environment.

Sabrina Winkel:

Story line hit downhill there. Wasn't impressed at all

Samidha Kumar:

nice idea :)

Szilard Hadobas:

I like the poses a lot! I feel the character parts stop from time to time. They should live all along the shot.