Jaime Santana:

Your blockout for the guy is good enough to just be splined, man. Although I can see you put a lot of emphasis on her, and she moves awesome. I absolutely love that the guy rings the bell for her. Please send me a finished version, this is golden.

Jamie F:

Lovely animation. But my first thought was that she's trying to check out his fingernails when she touches his hand. It's a little confusing

Beth Rowe:

doesnt quite feel like completed anim on the guy. her hand poses seem quite broken. as shes coming forward on crime there seems to be a big pop in the shoulder

Jonathan Fontaine:

Good start, the end is a bit confusing, the hip forward thrust on from 185 to 200 is a bit unnatural and lead to a not too readable pose around 211
the silhouettes on 211 is not very readable especially with the ring bell hiding part of the focus point (the two hands)

Alex Smith:

animation is smooth, the guy seems to be in stepped. I'm a little confused about what's happening.