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ONE SECRET FROM WAITRESS

by Yahia Kamal

Final Rating: 3.54. Finished 59 out of 85 entries.

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Animator: Yahia Kamal

Description: Waitress insists on selling her Products. Thanks for watching!

Experience: Enough to make this Piece

Time taken: 13 days approximately

Comments:

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Byron Pockrandt:

Not bad. The lip sync needs work. I really don't like how the kid moves his mouth, not sure if it's a rig issue or what. Some actions are fast and a little glitchy at the beginning. Otherwise, the lady has some good poses when listing off the options of water.

ro crown:

Love the style of these characters, so just think about how bigger and better these characters would look in 2d animation...just a humble suggestion for a bigger score than what I gave to you....of 4 stars.