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Animator: Nils Giebel

Description: Here is my entry to the June competition. Really liked to animate on the dialogue.I’m also really thankful for some criticism in order to learn and improve myself.
Hope you enjoy.

Experience: several years (part/free time)

Time taken: about a week

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Eyal Navon:

I like your idea, it's super funny. Your drawings are pretty solid too. I would recommend to focus more on animation and timing: your key poses barely move and then jump to the next key too drastically. Instead, try adding some extra little extremes around your keys before moving on to the next pose or key. (I am not speaking about „more inbetweens“, I am talking about adding subtle changes for both body, head and face before moving forward to your next key. For example the character leans slightly forward while turning the head a little left and right. But subtle so it still remains near your key). If the character's body doesn't move and only the mouth moves, it gives the impression of a robot. Don't be afraid to go beyond your keys. The essence of your key will remain, but a little more subtle movement is needed to bring your figures to life. Keep up the good work! Animation suits you!

Giancarlo Ferri:

The Idea is really good but it needs some smoothness at times!

Ariana Kanchuger:

I love your designs, facial expressions, and bouncy movements!

Charlotte:

Too bad it lacks some inbetweens to make it a little less choppy, but the designs are cool and the acting is pretty fun !

Jason:

Great start, the more you add the better it'll get :)