Comments:
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Mervyn Le MandarinOrange:
I think your characters are over acting..
Jan Abero:
Great Motion and Great Fluidity.
Craig P. Smith:
Looks kind of mechanical sometimes. I think you would benefit from some video reference to make you animation more believable. Nice flip up of the gun to the guys shoulder. Nice scene choice.
Justin Pearce:
If this were more refined, I would consider this Super Awesome, Or even the best, however, even though it isn't refined, it's excellent as it is, the characters and emotions make a lot of sense, and the mouths move the right way.
April Slocombe:
The characters almost look similar to Ramis and Murray in Ghostbusters and some of the movements, particularly at the beginning, are jerky but the rest of the animation is fine, I like the lip sync and I also like the shocked/surprised expression on the man with the glasses on towards the end,
Animator: Salvador Garcia Luque
Description: The characters enter a room carring guns. Egon warns Peter about not crossing the streams. Peter brags about being used to bad stuff. Then his confidence slips and asks Egon what he really meant. That provokes Egon to get quietly mad at him.
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 30 hours